Not bad, good use of the derivatives,i take Magis. Emery liked itr :)

Interesting format, the single-word lines are really strong and the Latinate vocabulary reinforces the message. *claps*

I like this part:

"In these sacredAncientWoods,There lives a Sylvan-A spirit of ages.

She slipsIn and outOf your Reality."

It's enchantingly chilling... or maybe chillingly enchanting.

.:*§*:. Calliope .:*§*:.

Wow, it was beautiful and sad too. nice job for a school assignment.

Tzotel

AWESOME!

Especially the last stanza! PURE GENIUS! Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!

And I REALLY mean that!

icewolf9 (16.23)

The wording of this is really just as magical and mystical as the topic. Great job, we really get the feel of this.

Hillary