this is amazing
m, human flesh
yum

haha, kidding, but really good job on the story i really liked it please write more

-h.l.b.

beautifully written, amazing job :D very haunting

wow, beautifully written.
its creepy but I just love it

That is a creepy ending. It's a good story though.

Man, this is...gross, but interesting, and..I don't know. I do like your mom's interpretation of it =) It is very well written, though.

I had a dream you ate me.

Luv~Alf

Wow, this was great writing. I only wish that there was more.

How creepy! But I loved it, not many people write about cannabalism (and probably because it turns their stomachs out...) but I loved the morbid feelig of this and the ironic ending. It's really unique! ~Avian

Brilliant ending, beautiful story. I mean the prose--certainly not the cannibalism! Though I suppose the way you wrote that was "beautiful" in a morbid sort of way. I LOVE the tone of the narration; it perfectly complements the topic and the setting.

P.S. You'd have more reviews if you allowed anonymous reviews. I tried to review this earlier but was put off by that feature. (:

I absolutely loved this! The king was represented very powerfully, and you did do a good job describing Caedo...i'd probably just let him eat me xD