Wow. Absolutely amazing work.

you know...I feel like I completely get it. And I feel that way too sometimes; it's so hard to get that balance. As per usual, you've written beautifully. I love the phrase 'iron eyes world', it's so appealling.

Omg. WOW. I'm going to go read the poem you said to read. Wow. Just Wow.

wow... just wow... you're completely on my favorites. this was amazing.

...good...

Amazing imagery and wonderful writing. You're really talented.

very well written, i like the violent imagery.

and i have to be honest, you're review did catch my attention.i must agree, very overwritten, but i also have to say i cant considerate it too overused if its always true.

words for thought.

You have a wonderful gift of purest talent - may it always bring you the pleasure it bestows on we, your readers!

Amazing symbolism and imagery. Sophisticated in a weird way that all writers try to achieve and, if they're like me anyway, aren't quite able to manage. Awesome poem! Mystix

i read this they day you put it up and wasn't able to review, then forgot the title & your pen names...anyway...WONDERFUL piece.

good god. this is fantasticulous. holy shit...just wow. i love it.

Wow, great poem, I love your style.

Beautiful expression and lovely descriptions.

I like the way everything you write is twisted a little to give it that extra meaning. And your symbolism is lovely.

I can't pick out my favourite bits because I love the whole entire absolutelyallofit thing! ;-)

Keep writing!

Utterly gorgeous amazing words...a really hazy feel to it.I love it.A fave.

Moonbeam E

Your imagery was really thought provoking. Nice work!

wow. breathtaking. loved the two middle stanzas best. wicked cool.