|Reviews for dark chocolate|
| Artemis Anderson 12/13/07 . chapter 1
Wow. Absolutely amazing work.
| Jezsh 12/21/05 . chapter 1
you know...I feel like I completely get it. And I feel that way too sometimes; it's so hard to get that balance. As per usual, you've written beautifully. I love the phrase 'iron eyes world', it's so appealling.
| The Fourth Fate 12/9/05 . chapter 1
Omg. WOW. I'm going to go read the poem you said to read. Wow. Just Wow.
| a lonely september 12/9/05 . chapter 1
wow... just wow... you're completely on my favorites. this was amazing.
| notACTUALLYwriting 11/30/05 . chapter 1
| tears-of-innocence 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Amazing imagery and wonderful writing. You're really talented.
| Aquafied 11/24/05 . chapter 1
very well written, i like the violent imagery.
and i have to be honest, you're review did catch my attention.i must agree, very overwritten, but i also have to say i cant considerate it too overused if its always true.
words for thought.
| GoneMissing 11/24/05 . chapter 1
You have a wonderful gift of purest talent - may it always bring you the pleasure it bestows on we, your readers!
| CiaoBellaxx 11/22/05 . chapter 1
Amazing symbolism and imagery. Sophisticated in a weird way that all writers try to achieve and, if they're like me anyway, aren't quite able to manage. Awesome poem! Mystix
| account not in use 11/19/05 . chapter 1
i read this they day you put it up and wasn't able to review, then forgot the title & your pen names...anyway...WONDERFUL piece.
| Thorn's-girl 11/10/05 . chapter 1
good god. this is fantasticulous. holy shit...just wow. i love it.
| Plinky 11/9/05 . chapter 1
Wow, great poem, I love your style.
Beautiful expression and lovely descriptions.
I like the way everything you write is twisted a little to give it that extra meaning. And your symbolism is lovely.
I can't pick out my favourite bits because I love the whole entire absolutelyallofit thing! ;-)
| Moonbeam Elegance 11/9/05 . chapter 1
Utterly gorgeous amazing words...a really hazy feel to it.I love it.A fave.
| breezy nostrils 11/9/05 . chapter 1
Your imagery was really thought provoking. Nice work!
| HellHeartedlyBent 11/8/05 . chapter 1
wow. breathtaking. loved the two middle stanzas best. wicked cool.