what a freaking cliffy... Please tell me you will elaborate further on this one! I like this one alot too... and I'm actually reveiwing something (That's saying something) So please please please write more! It's really good!

~*Clara*~

First paragraph has good imageries, but unless I'm mistaken, it's not "tees" but trees.

The female figure you also describe vividly. Establishing an image for the character. This is important.

Fourth paragraph, one mistake: "fathers" should be father's. It's easy to miss these things. And try to replace beauty as I'm sure the repetition can be avoided.

Given the nature of the story, maybe Amber would be better known as lover rather than girlfriend as you had given. The tone used in a fantasy story is especially important. And if Amber is going to play a bigger part (I'm assuming she will), then her image will have to be refined.

Caleb seems like the typical main character, somewhat strong with a soft side for woman (perhaps?). You established his character well, the "duty before pleasure" sort of person.

Overall, a couple of minor mistakes that may need editing, but on the whole, a good opening for a story. That's about it from me. I'm impressed you find my opinion valuable. Keep working on it.