|Reviews for All The Way|
| Animequirk 11/18/05 . chapter 1
My god that was freakin awesome. The details were extrodinary (yay watch me mess up another word!) I could clearly see where you were and how you were feeling. Your writing style has also improved, tis awesome. Great job, if there shall be, I can't wait for an update!
| Iris Devine 11/7/05 . chapter 1
very good! the writing is clear and poignant. either that or the fact that I'm in the cold basement sent shivers down my spine.
I liked how you used "but I suppose it's too late for that now" as a motif throughout. I wish you would find a way to work it into paragraphs three and four. I missed it there.
The concept of your story isn't necessarily an original one and doesn't necessarily have a new spin on it, but your writing style makes up for that.
| mrs.shigwa.cobain 11/5/05 . chapter 1
that was beautiful... I can't think of any other way to describe it.