A very haunting imagery. Very creepy but beautiful.

nicely written

Off-kilter, beautiful imagery that hits you in the gut and takes you as a prisoner...

Thanks for leaving such awesome reviews, by the way.

OMG! This is so genius! It sends chills through my spine! Mysterious yet it's not.(if that even makes sense) Its really great. Good job and KW!

Davida

I like the mystery in this...it's very chilling.

I'm on a memory vibe too right now.

Great piece.

creepy and cool

wow. this was amazing, fantastic ending.

love hana x

i like the theme in this. nicely written.

xo - Rei

wow the ending is very effective, applause. the images very vivid and haunting...clever choice of descriptions.

Very good. I loved it.

I liked this, the ending in particular was nicely written. Abstract and beautiful. Actually, yeah, I really like this.

wow, so... your poems are exeptional-well done.

I really like the ending! The way you left it hanging was indeed (because I can't think of a better word) chilling. It was great because it was so original. Well done and thanks for your review.

rides home from homicide here.

interesting intruiging.a dealthy beauty.