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| LeoParadise 2005-11-13 ch 1,   | Oh that was just sweet i cant wait 4 u 2 update h/w has been a big pain in the u know wut but u made my day with this chpe |
| AnchriB 2005-11-08 ch 1, | cool |
| fazman67 2005-11-03 ch 1, | good story. its sounds a bit choppy but keep working on the point of view and you'll get it. keep em comin. FAZ |