Aww... I like. I DID wonder what you'd do with the love triangle, but... While i don't exactly like that Pepin died, I guess I like it overall.

:) CD

First of all: congratulations on finishing your novel for NaNoWriMo. I've never done that before but I think I probably will next year. It's a great novel to be written in 30 days and you should be proud of it.

I liked Pepin's character; I thought he was consistent throughout. I was sad about him dying but I do think it was good for the story. Tanner's development was also good. I like how he started out as the enemy and he did slowly changed. There were some sketchy patches with Faye though. At first she was an expert at defending herself but as she got on with Tanner she seemed to become dependent on him quickly and I don't know... It just annoyed me. Eh, maybe I'm too much of a feminist... I also thought that the whole telekinesis was a little out of place. I mean, apart from the fact that there were no other supernatural goings on, it was just there and it didn't have much meaning in the plot, just a way for her to escape. You didn't really expand on it and it just seemed to be as it was a way to single Faye out even more, when I thought she didn't really need it.

Okay, enough with my incessant rambling trying to explain things... lol. Anyway... all I have left to say is that I thought the ending seemed a little rushed but I'm not surprised, seeing as you broke a the 50,0 barrier and were pleased to finish. Overall, this was a great story though and was definitely worth the read.

Sorry about not reviewing lately... my computer's been behaving badly and it just got fixed about an hour or so ago. I loved the ending! I nearly cried! And I don't cry often, so consider it a feat. Personally, characters are one of the main aspects for the story (if not more important than the storyline itself), and you certainly have accomplished quite a feat with all of the ones in "Faye". I salute you for that. This story was so refreshing. It's so sad that I won't get updates anymore! Wah!

Who knows? Maybe I'll participate in NaNoWriMo next year just for fun. Like I would actually accomplish is a COMPLETELY different story...

I really liked the ending. I was really sad about Pepin dying, and I yelled at the computer about it, but I think Tanner and Faye are good together too. I appreciated how easy Tanner accepted Faye's telekinesis. That's not exactly a small secret. All in all, a really great story. I can't wait to see what kind of story comes next, and I will keep reading your stories as long as you keep writing.Keep it up,S.S. Dailey

The ending is excellent! The happily-ever-after kind of ending.. The sad part is Pepin's death and Nadia staying in Lugen.. But well done! I always enjoy reading your story!! :p

No! Not Pepin! You know, all of your good stories end with one of my favorite characters dying. Really good story though.S.S. Dailey

I thought it was terrific!! I really got sucked into this story! You did an awesome job of rounding out the characters and the plot. I actually teared up at the end...I'm not kidding. I plan on checking out some of your other stories now that I've gotten so use to your great writing!

It's a good thing that those bad guys are dead... Such a pity that Pepin's dead... Luckily Tanner has the sense to bury him... Wonder how Faye will react to the news!! Good story as usual! And I have nothing bad to say!! :p

Oh, that was so, so sad.*tears fall onto upturned lips* That was great! So well developed...OH, I can't wait to see the ending... Your story is awesome to be so 'random' as you put it.

Yes, you're mean! But great chapter anyhow! I love where this is going...well, I mean, I don't enjoy pain or anything, but the conflict is awesome.

Awesome chapter! The ending! OMG! Oh, someone save him!

Ops, looks like Pepin's in trouble! You do update your story fast, you know! Not that I'm complaining... :p

This is so frustrating... I don't like having to sit and wait and try to figure out what will happen next. This is such a great story. I can't wait to read the rest.

Awesome job! I'm so glad you met your goal! I can't wait to read this story's conclusion (it's a great fic). Will there be a sequel? (Of course, I don't know how this ends, so...) Oh, and are you going to do this again next year?

Oh, I want to read the next chapter and see exactly what Pepin says...oh! How far away are you from 50 thou? Have you reached it yet? Will you reach it by midnight? Oh, the excitement of the story and your own personal goals intertwined...