Good meaning, passion. Beginning was a bit weak, but it got better near the end. Rythym was bit off. Overall, kudos.

very nice! this reminds me of a song for some reason "There is nothing more godless than war, so what are we fighting for?"

anyway, well set out and written.

8/10

Claire(thanks for reviwing me!_)

the begging was a little weak, but after that it was really good

God has the power to save all, thats what makes him God. Hes not gunna come down and slay the evil and blah blah blah we have to listen to what he says first, then he can save all of us.

Although, divided, we fall even faster.

'A house divided against itself cannot stand.'

Wow, brilliant. I agree with your message, I have similar poems. Very well written. United we fall indeed.