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| elvenstorm 2006-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseLovely poem, especially like the wole mystery at the end! Beautiful images all the way through which just makes it even better to read. Well done x |
| LoveAlways05 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI thought this one was SWEET! i love the ending great job |
| Naruto's Territory 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseyet another fabulous one, callie!keep up the good work!-^__^- |
| bound_to_break 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey callie, This was an awesome poem.As we would find out from Sledgehammers review(pst,Hey brit, I'm the second reviewer hahaha) anywho as I was saying this poem was awesome, I liked the rhyming and the title fit perfectly, we have to make sure the titles alwyas fit with the poem or it would just ruin everything which in this case everything fit, great work.KW |
| silentscreamer07 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseO MY BOB! YOU ACTUALLY WROTE SOMETHNG! Finally ! I mean, ive only been waiting for about a month!! Yeash ka peash ka bob! :P Welcome back, you were greatly missed...which im sure you can tell by al the reviews youve gotten on this poem so far...*smiles*(psst...IM THE FIRST ONE TO REVIEW!)at, least, i think i am... ne whos, I liked this poem! and i loved the ending...a butterfly in disguise!! don don don don! "I love butterflies, but they die, don't they?" quote from a gurl at skool...ill never fully get it...wats new? ne wats..*kw* i hope u post more soon! hasta luego poopoo! George |