i can TOTALLY relate to this poem. i feel like that a lot and at one point i thought everyone despised me. i'm over that but i still feel depressed sometimes.

I know how this feels so the poem was really touching. Very grapic and I particualy like the beginning of the poem. Sometimes it's better just to move on and forget people say, but this is usually easier said than done. Well done, very moving.

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this poem is very true sweetie i can rember all the time you cried over the bastard but you no longer need to cry as im never gonna hurt you nice bit of potry tho, its good but hopefully you will never be his slave again