I can really picture this as a song, great job.

i loved verse 2. but it was all lovely. thank you!-kae

kinda confusing but deep, I like it it would make a great song lyric

Love it.

oh! so sad. so beautiful. well done, very well done. oh, it's lovely. I love the image that you can see defeat in their eyes, that their wings are painted on now, instead of being real things of feather and warmth

"My butterfly, those painted wings are starting to fade away" I love this line!

Very deep, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!

P.S. Thanks for the review!

every time i read it it grows on me. its really good and symbolic. but i did like same old tricks better. i'd say that and ice queen are your best ones. but still this is really really goodlove lyra!

very metophoric...if that's how you spell it P. Good poem, your emotion stands out strong in this piece. The only thing that I failed to understand was the repeating oh's and try's in the chorus. Keep writing.

Staring at the Infamous...

you spelt chorus wrong. sorry. i'm annoying about spelling.

I LOVE THIS SONG. The title is beautiful. I will favourite it because I love it and relate to it so much. The bridge is beautiful, as is the rest of it.