|Reviews for Painted Wings|
| alter-ego52 2/22/06 . chapter 1
I can really picture this as a song, great job.
| aaidenkae 12/28/05 . chapter 1
i loved verse 2. but it was all lovely. thank you!-kae
| Yokotaashi 11/28/05 . chapter 1
kinda confusing but deep, I like it it would make a great song lyric
| White Tea and Ginger 11/28/05 . chapter 1
| SliversofSilverPain 11/11/05 . chapter 1
oh! so sad. so beautiful. well done, very well done. oh, it's lovely. I love the image that you can see defeat in their eyes, that their wings are painted on now, instead of being real things of feather and warmth
| KimEh-3 11/8/05 . chapter 1
"My butterfly, those painted wings are starting to fade away" I love this line!
Very deep, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
P.S. Thanks for the review!
| Lyrabird 11/4/05 . chapter 1
every time i read it it grows on me. its really good and symbolic. but i did like same old tricks better. i'd say that and ice queen are your best ones. but still this is really really goodlove lyra!
| loyanofviolence 11/3/05 . chapter 1
very metophoric...if that's how you spell it P. Good poem, your emotion stands out strong in this piece. The only thing that I failed to understand was the repeating oh's and try's in the chorus. Keep writing.
Staring at the Infamous...
| i-miss-roses 11/3/05 . chapter 1
you spelt chorus wrong. sorry. i'm annoying about spelling.
I LOVE THIS SONG. The title is beautiful. I will favourite it because I love it and relate to it so much. The bridge is beautiful, as is the rest of it.