very dark, yet very good. keep up the work. Also please read and review to some of my stuff.

Creepy. That's a pretty awesome jump rope rhyme. Keep writing! :)

Woah... that's cool. the certain amount of syllablles each line gives it great rhythm

Great imagery, and I like how you explained the "process" of becoming 'branded' by the villain. I AM going to sing this while jump-roping.

a really original idea! great work! love the lines: 'Touching, Cutting, Branding, Claiming.You make me yours, my soul is forsaking.' really lovely poem.

Dark; but the morbid tone of this creates a power picture of these girls. Well done.

Juliet.