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Reviews For: The Red Carpet - Reviews: Page 1 of 56

sappyromancelvr
2008-10-28
ch 25,
This story was absolutely phenomenal!!
:)
alyssa
2008-10-28
ch 1,
Very good so far! But if l go by the names of some of your characters, you're a gilmore girls fan. which l happen to be watching right now! l love gilmore girls. great story.
drink drive and die
2008-10-13
ch 25,
ooh. THE END was very unexpected and anticlimatic, but then I guess real life is often like that, we can't all have emotional rollercoaster lives can we? Thanks for the upload anyway! Good luck with your next story! You are still writing aren't you? The plotline you have up seems less cliche than this one, not more original but somehow less done. No offence meant ;) I'm looking forward to it! but it's been nearly two years since you've appeared here..
RayaSlayer
2008-09-30
ch 25,
yay!
Hehe..i love this story!
This is like, my second time reading it :D
It is such a pleasure to read
thank you so much :)
ashki
2008-07-31
ch 1,
this is interesting! I like it very much! hope hope you do more of your stories! I love the characters and the plot and the twisted events! I really do find very interesting! cant wait for your to make another! til then^^
shesabeautyx
2008-07-20
ch 25,
Here's to a job well done. I really enjoyed this story, and even if it had cliche splattered all over it from the very beginning, it was still an awesome read.

One thing I'd like to point out though - at one point Summer said something like "You guys hated each other in 7th, were somewhat friends in the 8th and then completely in love in the 9th" Obviously it's not word for word, but throughout the flashbacks I feel like we never really saw the point when they were somewhat friends and they were actually still bickering at the beginning of 9th. I mean it'sone dialouge but it was bugging me so I thought I would point it out.

But I enjoyed reading the story a lot. I think I liked Kaitlin's character more than I did Tiara's but heck, I gotta admire for reisting erik as long as she did. And speaking of said boy... I love him. I totally think that you should make a sequel and make him fall out of love with Tiara and in love with me... I'm kidding, of course. But hey if I ever had a guy like that resisting him is something I would not do. I would hug him tight and never let go the moment I laid eyes on him.

And Bailey. Was she oblivious or was she oblivious? I didn't think it was possible for someone to be so dense and I respect Tiara for actually not letting that get in between their friendship. Although I think Erik was a MAJOR jerk for doing what he did to Bailey... it was uncalled for, he could have totally used some ** or ladder climbing freshman that probably wouldn't have cared in the end.

I enjoyed reading the flashbacks too, they were a great addition to the story.

Trey.. he was an interesting character... and I regret that we didn't get his reaction after Tiara and Erik started dating. I felt like him and Tiara should have had some sort of closure - maybe an adimittance that she had always belonged with Erik and he was just too stupid to realize it? Lol. And I wanted closure between him and Erik too... but the story is finished now so I guess it's a lost cause.

Anyways, I loved the story. Great job on it. The whole celebrity backsdrop was a good touch - I was seriously cracking up with that whole Aubrey/Angelina conversation. I don't know why, it was hilarious.

But yeah, good job :)
Amaryllis Faye
2008-07-07
ch 25,
sweet ;)
aly.LOVES.you
2008-07-04
ch 3,
this chapter is cool.
i saw how the 2 sister loved their father.
sweet.

__
it's ok for me
if the housekeeper is a FILIPINO.
i'm a proud FILIPINO too,
and i'm not ashamed of it.
i'm aware that many FILIPINOS are
working abroad for them to support their families.
_
Alice Carrie
2008-07-04
ch 1,
ha! It girl, just what i've been looking for. I mean, i find it really interesting and i wanna read the end of it, hm wonder how it al turns out...
aly.LOVES.you
2008-07-04
ch 1,
i love this one.
Kaitlyn is such a good girl and a sister ofcourse.
i like Tiara.
ERIK too.
aly.LOVES.you
2008-07-04
ch 2,
i like this chapter.
^^
caelynne
2008-07-04
ch 25,
Aww, I seriously love The Red Carpet so much... (it's like my 10th time reading this). You really should continue writing, you're so talented at this that I'm gobsmacked ;)

I admire you lots, please start writing again, you're so AWESOME!
Elle Winters 9
2008-06-27
ch 25,
its so sweet.. might even make it to the same level as sugar pic =P
centenarian
2008-06-03
ch 25,
That was seriously, seriously, cute, sweet and fluffy. I mean...wow! It was awesome. Cliched, yes, but I still love it. And well, Erik really is loyal and stuff isn't he? I mean, usually...people just give up after a while. Like me.

You live in the Philippines? Well, I do too. :)
centenarian
2008-06-01
ch 1,
I know I'm gonna sound like a crazy, whiny ** right about now but... first line, i spotted a grammatical error so I thought I'd run it past you before I continued on with the story.

I, Tiara Briar-Madden, was facing a huge dilemma.

Isn't it supposed to be...?

I, Tiara Briar-Madden, am facing a huge dilemma.

Yeah, I don't know if I'm correct but I distinctly remember my English teacher pounding that lesson into my brain over the years. The lesson being... am following the I's. Anyways, I think I'll read on now. :)
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