"your november-grey eyes stay wide as apples" struck me as an interesting line

i adore the whole last stanza. i can't say much more than that, it's a gorgeous poem.

W.o.w. Can I only say that this is brilliant? The movements and the words are lovely, and leave me speechless.

Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the way you set it up and the words you used to descibe things. Nice job =)

Stylized with intrigue. Lovely work.

I love the description of "November-grey eyes" and "misery-grey eyes". Beautiful.