Ah... that was pretty creepy. Very... graphic. But obviously well-written to make it that creepy.

*jawdrop* Wow, this is amazing. sickeningly beautiful. lol I don't even have the words to describe it but it's amazing. Very well written is probably the best I can say.

My God.

Deeply disturbing and thought-provoking. I had never really thought of it in that way.

The irony and symbolism really go far. There aren't many really descriptive passages, but then that's not what this piece is about.

Very well-written. I look forward to the other parts :-)