the parents no matter how much affected did not have the right to make her feel as if she should have died. I have tears in my eyes. All your fics are so incredibly emotional...I love it. I think I'll add you to my favourite authors because for a long while now I've been looking for moving fics. All I've been getting is unoriginal yet well developed fics. I wanted that oomph. And I got it here. Congratulations on another job well done.

Gulistanlik

this is an amazing piece. very emotional and beautiful.

Well that's going straight on my favourites list.

Absolutely gorgeous piece of writing. Brought me close to tears. I really felt the pain of losing a twin, even though I've never had one. The whole leaf idea was beautiful.

The ending - with the gravestone and the leaf and the room and everything - was absolutely beautiful. I loved it all.

Pure beauty. Amazing piece of writing.

Keep writing!

Wow you are really good at writing. that is an excellent story. Good job.:)

Beautiful. Short, but beautiful. You have talent.

Pandemica

::sniffles:: How do you not get more reviews? I'm almost ashamed that my story is doing so well, because just this short little piece has so much more depth than FFY will ever have. You're amazing. Please don't ever, ever be sorry for sharing your work with us. I, for one, crave it. It's so rare to find something of substance on these sites, so I'm always ecstatic when I find stories as well written and interesting as yours. FANTASTIC job on this. I look forward to more. :o)

i swear that is one of the most touching stories i've ever read in my life, no matter how short. it made me cry! well...almost but i'm not a very emotional person! i loved it!