 shesabeautyx 2008-06-17 . chapter 1Wow. I honestly feel like you read my mind while writing this poem.
Satan knows our weaknesses, and he tries to use those to get to us, but God is so much stronger, and we're forever safe in His grace.
I truly really really loved your poem. I can't even explain in words how much it effected me.
As for the guy, I hope it works out. There is always the possibility you guys could base your relationship on the word of God and there isn't a bigger blessing than that.
So amazing job. Keep up the good work :) |
 Needa S 2006-01-25 . chapter 1Satan has a way of trying to get to us, he knows our weak points. But he is no match to God and through God we find strength to fight him. Excellent write. God Bless ya. |
 Twigstudios1972 2005-11-14 . chapter 1Wow! Funny how that works. One moment you can't stand to be around that person then you can't stand to be away from them. Great written work as usual Wolfie. And way to go on keeping the hormones in check. Keep me in your prayers. TWIG COG SOG |
 Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-11-11 . chapter 1Great way to get your priorities straight by writing a poem about them!!
WAITING IS WORTH IT!
Just ask my husband...
Blessings and praying for you.Katie Kat(With a cat on her lap) |
 Serene 2005-11-07 . chapter 1 Beautifully written, and you asked for several responses, and here's mine.
Caught my attention, the description made me want to keep reading. It's clear how devoted you are to religion, and I loved how you portrayed that emotion.
Bravo, I loved it. |
 flamer! 2005-11-05 . chapter 1 This blows more than you obviously do. |
 gn0sis 2005-11-04 . chapter 1Wow. I was about to go on a rant in the review I was already crafting in my mind until I saw your fifth stanza. I must admit, you caught me off guard. :)
I do admit that even I feel the baser passions of the animal, however, as you put it so well, "Pulls me to my senses / Brings me back to reality," meaning of course that erotic love is not love at all.
Good poem :) |
 from beneath the bell jar 2005-11-04 . chapter 1Very inspirational poem. Well written. |
 Ajna 2005-11-04 . chapter 1This made me smile a bit. You just never know who you're going to fall in love with.. |
 The Postscript 2005-11-04 . chapter 1This really reminds me of something...the opposite of what is happening to you, kind of, this guy I used to love a lot, but now I dislike him after finding out who he really was...after he mocked me and talked behind my back. Anyway, great work. Always glad to read more of your work. Keep writing! God bless, silent. |
 BJ Worth 2005-11-04 . chapter 1Wow, this poem is such a blessing to me, you don't even know. I love the honesty of it. Stay strong! God's got great things planned. |