Good thing I'm not a serious poet. o.o

I enjoyed this piece a lot. The worst part was I was actually putting it to a Renaissance-folky bard tune. It fit pretty good, and it added in some laughs for me. xD

One thing: In places, the flow felt a bit off, but it wasn't too off-putting.

I really liked the ending. Worked perfectly. :]

I like this because it's about a pumpkin king. Heh heh.

lol - I thought this was a cute little violent poem lol. I was so sure that she was going to stab the pumpkin guy and then feed the nation off of pumpkins lol. But great rhyme, word choice, and flow for a goofy poem about pumpkin lovin lol.