wow. that was stunning. i love the way you write and portray situations. marvelous.love.

Nice style, though it is on the verge of being overdone. This is worth several reads, and I enjoy it. I love that you actually say something with your words.

it reminds me so much of myself in a weird way. i don't know if that's a good thing yet, but i love the style of this.

most interesting...The formatting technique is captivating, but the picture of the world-weary woman definitly steals the show

I love the format here and the bit of randomness of the poem. Well done.