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Reviews For: Eloquence into the Night
Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2005-11-17 . chapter 1
Cool. Very nicely done.
fantasyEsalno 2005-11-04 . chapter 1
I liked it, it was beautifully written... however, there is one thing you need to change.

"Yet the moon repels you,

And draws you to its light"

'Draws you' means to attract, which is the opposite of repel. Or is there some odd meaning in that which I haven't gotten? :D
Ajna 2005-11-04 . chapter 1
Morbid and oh-so beautiful... I enjoyed reading this.
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