This is really good, i like so far. though you do have a fascination about someone called Destiny waking up next to a naked angel. . . . its funny anyway. I'm looking forward to reading more, oh a pink elephant! *runs off after pink elephant*

Oh how I miss this story...

denny. like dennys. the place where i had breakfast at before. m...m... good. very short, if you dont mind me saying. but, it was funny

i like your story can't wait till the next one

the only thing i don't like is the name eddie(every eddie i know is a b*stard)but that a personal opinion so don't mind that

plz come out with the next chpt soon

i wish u luck on your writing

more. more. more. i NEED , i got fictionpress to work again.

It's a good story and I can't wait for the next chapter than!Though at first I kinda liked it, but I curiosity REALLY peaked so that is how I read the second chapter and now I simply can't wait!Ja ne than!Hell's Sorrow

This is a wonderful idea! I can't wait to read the rest of it. Bless you for actually using a non-Japanese name for your main character. That is a VERY nice change. Your pacing is well done and and I really like the way you write. It's as if it is from Destiny's POV even though it's not written in first person. I like her character as well - she's not the stereotypical, bubbly, "loved-by-all", selfless shojo character.

Only found one mistake and it's probably a typo:

Andwaited.

Yeah. Space. Those kinds of mistakes are really tough to catch ;_;