Well, this was very interesting, I liked the fact of course that it didn't have a happy ending. Not saying that I like things with that 'Unhappily ever after', but this was better that way.

Great job.

wow...that was...haunting. a little creepy, very sad, and in the end it was almost...wistful. hmm.

this is really cool. i hope you continue with this story.

that was... interesting... in a good way. I'm a little shocked, I like it, it's so simple and hard core yet cool and different. Bravo. keep it up.

Wow...creepy, but still as satisfying as ever. This is beautiful, and I love the way you described Valerie in Jessica's point of view. Excellent job.

~~Trinity

i think that the idea of this is great- you could totally develop it into a story- im really curious as to why Jessica was jealous enought to kill. good job!