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| BangBangYourDead 2005-12-03 ch 9,  | abuseOk thats awesome! When is she going to start suspecting she has "blue blood?" |
| miss-blackhair 2005-12-02 ch 9, | abusewell, im pretty flattered. LOL. i feel like murdering Raphael right now. but i think i'll melt halfway coz i have a thing about dark haired guys. hahah. thomas kinda worked up here, huh? go girl! keep up the good job. =) update soon! |
| miss-blackhair 2005-11-27 ch 8, | abusesorry i wasnt able to read and review earlier. i was SO busy. oh well. good job. van sounds mean. more of him! LOL. i mean, he sounds really interesting. =) update soon! |
| MiidKniight 2005-11-27 ch 8, | abuseI haven't written in awhile. My computer has been down. But I'm happy I found one. Your story is getting better and better and better. *you get three betters* When is she going to find out? When? When? I can't wait for the next chap! I didn't see anything wrong but i think your story is improving with practice! Waiting patiently |
| Discombobulated 2005-11-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is a great story! Please keep writing if you don't you'll break my heart into a thousand pieces! KEEP WRITING and remember SUGAR IS GOOD FOR YOU IT MAKES YOU GROW! |
| clareh-6 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuselike...like..like..i shoudl really stop saying like..i love your story |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-11-26 ch 8, | abuseGood Gravy! I meant you CANT stop now! It is good and nice update. ♥BangBangYourDead |
| FadedBreakdown 2005-11-26 ch 8, | abuse...I'm confused Okay I'm guessing that he's implying that Raphael is trouble...they seemed like just friends to me tho...huh...maybe I'm getting the vibe wrong... oh well oh...and i love your story...LOL - Theresa |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-11-25 ch 7, | abuseNo You Can Stop Now!! Its too good. Thanks about my pen name.. I like it too.. Lol |
| underage me 2005-11-22 ch 2, | abusecool, some español, im mexican and im quite fluent in both spanish and english, its pretty cool, i usually just translate for my parents when they dont know something... well must go read... ciao. |
| underage me 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abusewow... im in a doozie, looks like im in the middle of something, well its intrigued me so ill read, hooray, go to go read, go to go read, go to go read... ciao. |
| sofiya05 2005-11-21 ch 6, | abusehey, oh my goodness! dis is bludy brilliant! i luv dt u've made thoms more involved in this mix...update soon. |
| Scribbling-Ally 2005-11-21 ch 6, | abuseOnce again a wonderful chapter,it was captivating from the beginning to the end.I loved that you put Thomas' POV, it was a way to get to know him better, I hope you'll keep doing that.Loved the daft comment, please use more british words in the dialogues, it's such a wonderful language (I know it's baically english, but theirs is more... hoity toity-did that make any sense?) Anyhow, please update soon. Ally |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-11-16 ch 5, | abuseAH! I love it. Must update. |
| Scribbling-Ally 2005-11-15 ch 5, | abuseOoh, and the plot thickens. Wow, I've got a million questions running trough my head now. *Just take a sec to picture that... very funny* (sorry 'bout that). Anyhow, I think the most important one right now is; Are Thomas and Maria family? I mean, he and her mom have the same last name. I really enjoyed this, please update soon. |