That was, if you would allow me to groom your ego, an absolute masterpiece, utterly fantastic and written with unparalleled imagination. It was simply superb and superior to 90 percent of the other stories I have read on this site. The imagery was utterly brilliant, I am quite partial to post-apocalyptic subject matter.

Very Good. Keep it up, you'll get places.

I may be QUITE far off, but I see a cleansing, a renewal...

The contrast of the dry ruins and the ocean was incredible.

I really enjoyed this piece. As chaotic and nonsensical you claim it to be, it shows to me you spoke of an intangible, conceptual reality, one within the mind.

Wonderful.

This was well written, it really moved me. The part where he can't remember his family hit me the hardest. Although I don't agree with the sentiment that having no heaven or hell would be utopia, it is still a powerfully written story. Nice job.