This has a song feel to it. You should be a songwriter, you know that? You'd make big bucks and then you don't have to owe me anymore

i liek this a lot.. great question & awesome ending

Lovely. I like how the doubt seeps in almost unnoticed, at the end. Love the flow-of-consciousness writing, it made for a very peaceful read!:) Good job, keep writing!

i like this a lot *relates* good work