This is short, sweet, and beautiful. It sings of a certain belief in the afterlife yet expresses grief and acceptance all at once. Very smooth pattern, much like a lullaby. I like the contrast of 'in the dark where you sleep' and 'dream of sunshine.' Great job!

Alya

Aww...how sweet!

I myself am afraid of death, but hey! Not when you portray it so beautifully!

aw. its kind of bittersweet.subject is sad but the mother shows the side of optimsm about death that people dont see anymore (or ever in some cases) i really enjoyed it. GReat!

Cool. I like the rhythm. You have some lovely lines in here. I very good poem overall. It sounds like a couple of my own angst poems (not saying, of course, that all of mine are perfect.).Yes. I really like it.

Wow, that is a very very nice poem.

It doesn't seem sad to me, more of the mother accepting her child's death and talking about the spiritual world where her son now resides.

RK