Reviews for Dream of Sunshine

Black Alya Wolf 2007-04-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is short, sweet, and beautiful. It sings of a certain belief in the afterlife yet expresses grief and acceptance all at once. Very smooth pattern, much like a lullaby. I like the contrast of 'in the dark where you sleep' and 'dream of sunshine.' Great job! Alya
Aluminum Tinkerbell 2006-05-19 ch 1,	abuseAww...how sweet! I myself am afraid of death, but hey! Not when you portray it so beautifully!
AgainstAllOdds 2005-11-12 ch 1,	abuseaw. its kind of bittersweet.subject is sad but the mother shows the side of optimsm about death that people dont see anymore (or ever in some cases) i really enjoyed it. GReat!
akflribmdjewlgkhjtrifjhbjnf... 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abuseCool. I like the rhythm. You have some lovely lines in here. I very good poem overall. It sounds like a couple of my own angst poems (not saying, of course, that all of mine are perfect.).Yes. I really like it.
RivanKnight 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, that is a very very nice poem. It doesn't seem sad to me, more of the mother accepting her child's death and talking about the spiritual world where her son now resides. RK