|Reviews for Train Wreck at Las Vegas|
| The Silver Tiger 11/11/05 . chapter 1
| Elizabeth Bilberry 11/6/05 . chapter 1
The emotions in this piece, sound touchingly honest. Reading about your pain and how you described it, just made my heart break.
Keep writing, you words keep me captivated.
| L.M.Crow 11/5/05 . chapter 1
you know how i feel about emo poetry.
This one got ruined.
to many prepositional phrases