m the second stanza has to be my favorite. The first line really worked for me. I liked this. So keep it up.

This is amazing. The words are great. I wish I could be so good with my words. Really, really great poem.

This brings about a peaceful calm. No rushing, just words spread down the page in a somewhat soothing way. I love the line, "you've never traveled past the sky", this line reminds me of one of my favorite e.e. cummings works. Excellent job creating pace. Good work.

*sighs*After quite a strenuous day, this piece has showered me in rhymes and images.**Astarte

I have read alot of poetry. But this gives me a dream that is so full of hope, so full of promise, this is my favorite poem. You wrote my favorite poem. Thank you!

Thankyou for the recent reviews. I read this while tipsy... there was a certain connection with my immediate surroundigs, it made me just drift away, which little else fails to do. A very certain sense of freedom with this.

I love the title-that's what caught my eye. As for the poem itself, the words really flow. And its length is perfect; not too long or short. I can see this becoming a song almost-a melody is already playing in my head. This is really good, and I can't find anything to critisize about it.

"slip from the grasp of hate and love" sounds as though you wish this person to halt their feelings. i still like the flow and format, though. lovely.

Good poem. Don't really know what to say except good poem.

All my favorite poetry rhymes, and this is no exception!

I like this.. well done

Ooh pretty, the innocence of landscape is used so effectively. I haven't read anything of yours for ages, was worth the wait :)

u must think. a lot. coz u write so much poetry. deep poetry. :D very, very nice. im still working mi way down that endless list uve posted...

somewhat uplifting :D and good attempt at rhyming here. I liked the line "You've never traveled past the sky" because i can somehow relate to it..in a remote way. do keep writing :D

That's lovely, and so full of hope. I keep meaning to read through all your poems but I'm not getting much time to read/write anything lately.