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| darkgurl92 2008-08-16 ch 7,  | abuseso i'm guessing luke came there to dumped her...interesting..why thought..update soon.. |
| Emeraldz 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abusePlease Please Please every month i come back to see if this story has been updated...i really enjoy this story and i think i should get more reviews...please come back to it |
| FM Radio 2007-07-26 ch 7, | abuseWhat happened? Did he break up with her? You have to update! And soon! |
| Water Block 2007-04-26 ch 7, | abuseI love this story! The interactions are wonderful, and you characterize everyone so realistically. Arista isn't just the school ** bully, she has some depth (not that I care, but her interactions with the other characters become more interesting when she has more than one level) Love Nea's character. Who was the friend she let escape? Is it someone you've already introduced? Great chapter. I can't wait until you update! |
| Water Block 2007-04-26 ch 6, | abuseThat ** **! I love Anna so much-how could Arista be so flippant when saying someones father DIED to get away from their child? Does she have NO soul? Also, Luke is being such a jealous **. "get me a soda" just because she was finally having fun talking to Thane. Great chapter! |
| Water Block 2007-04-26 ch 5, | abusePoor James! Stupid, ** Luke. Just because he was all embarrassed at being caught staring at Nea, he has to rib the boy so hard it ruins his relationship with his best friend! Also, this deal where Nea is being maid is almost as bad as the notebook's contents being spread around school; she'll be playing the pefect role of "scum" -as the snobs deem working people to be worthless. Poor Nea. Luke is going about this "I have a crush on you, and I want you to like me back" thing all wrong. Great chapter. |
| Water Block 2007-04-26 ch 4, | abuseI had a feeling Lilly was Arista's sister. Love Luke's POV. Can't wait to see what happens! |
| Water Block 2007-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story-interesting POV's, and I always love the "he/she found my diary and now know's my secrets" story line when done well. |
| MacNWoody 2007-03-26 ch 7, | abuseI like the story and where its heading, but you might need to edit it somewhat...I can do this a lot, but I think you typed words you weren't meaning to say (like Arista standing there wet from the melting eyes...I think you meant ice.) otherwise, good job, and update soon, okay? |
| ritapita 2007-02-21 ch 7, | abusei love it so far and i'm really excited to find out what happens. i really hope you update. =] |
2007-01-03 ch 7, anon. | abusewrite more please |
| Debbie 2007-01-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really liked this chapter because SO much happened...so what's next? That was so cute with what Nea told Lilly about her friendship with James..Personally I think that Luke really does have a thing for Nea and he is just in denial. Nea does like Luke and it freaks her out that she can hate him as much as she loves him. Well hopefully you can update soon!! --*DEBBIE*-- |
| craze0102 2007-01-01 ch 7, | abusehey, this was a good chapter. it showed a different side of everybody. update soon. |
| Tempest116 2006-12-31 ch 7, | abuseI was half hoping that Luke was going to catch Nea standing in the driveway. I wanted to see what their confrontation would be like in the new surrounding. ^_^ Anyways nice chapter it was pretty lengthy. I like that lol. |
| ravenblaque 2006-12-29 ch 7, | abusegood story line. 2 thumbs up! |