wow...jenna..wow...once again..you wrote an amazing poem! those last two lines..so powerful. good job!

I liked and agreed with your view on the whole fairytale thing. 'fighting for the life we once treasured.' was also a very powerful way to end the poem, because I'm sure it's true (on mot occasions). Well done, then.

i really like this especially the flow please read and review.

The irony of it all...I find it cool that you compare our existence to a corny disney movie. The words really causea ripple in day-to-day routines. So kudos to ya on that.

Random thought, disney movies are more gothic and twisted than you think it is..P...

It's ironic how fairy tales always end; their plots are always so predictable. In that sense, I never liked them.

EB

That really was quite inspiring. I think I'm going to put this as a referral on my next story...

Very well written, although I'd change the "per say" to "per se".