Hey!

Woh. Okay. A tad confusing. But good, all the same. Kinda sweet. But did you mean you were dead and buried underneath your field of daffodils there at the end? Well, if I had a place chosen to be buried at, I would choose the old timey way of putting a person in a boat, and letting them float down a river, while it burns them. That way, what's left of me would travel the oceans, just like my soul craves. Well, anywho, EXCELLENT POEM! KEEP IT UP!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

beautiful

I love the ending, very unique and it seems like the meaning coudl be very different from the rest of the poem.

keep it up.

I like the repition. And I like the feel of this- optimistic, sunny, bright, and happy.

Keep up the great work.

Hillary