Hi Kate!

Although "your" in the third to the last line should be "you're", this poem is cute. The examples you included are presented nicely.

I tell you, I love the sun but I can also relate to what you said here. The temperature in my country can rise up to 32 degrees Celsius. You know what, one day my father told me to count how many times I would say the sentence "It's so hot" in one day. Every time I would think of that incident, I would stop complaining about the heat. _

Rock on!

Doray

where do you live? i could use some weather like that, lol

good work you have talent

Nice work! _ Write on!

Anna