Hey!

PERFECT! I have to say, you're a way better poet then me! I love it! Great way of getting your feeling across, and the hard rock imagery was perfect. You put your feelings in a way that everybody can understand them. GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

Hey human...(maybe) hehe...well this is so cool. you metaphorized or whatever-ized music's greatness to a sunshine in the dark! That is so great...rock on sistah! (and just to clear it up, I'm not a fellow sistah. haha :P)

I love the ending.. awesome poem

I love this. This is exactly how I feel about stroms. You write it so beautifully.

Keep it up.