Oh my god, you must update. Your story is really interesting. I've trolled the fantasy section for a while, and this has a really unique cast of characters. :)

xCandid

Hello Mah Cheerio!

I love this story! Im very interested to see what happens next.Dellatrix is such a complicated person. I think it would be interesting to see Lux be with her. It seems Dellarix has been through enough pain in her life, she should have some happiness. I love Raven's character. Ohh! Love triangle! muwah! lol
I just really adore this story in general.
I hope you update soon! I see that you haven't inawhile.

Till Next Time!
Liz

hi there!it's been a while since you updated this story of yours... I've been craving for the progress between Lux and Raven and also other characters! sobs... have pity on my patience... hope to see updates on this! thanks!

PS: I'm a fan of yours :P

more! that was really suprising when u said dellatrix was gay... update soon

Raven's so caring and understanding sexual demon :P haha I'm surprised dellatrix actually kissed lux! omg... Kaeriel's tenderness towards sorae wasn't quite expected! lolx. Keep up the good work!

wow,that's a hot chapter btw lux n raven. really lusty raven! lol, what a pity sedark jumped in :P

sparks btw the elf prince and sorae! lolx, nice!

lovely! hehe, you're good in generating ideas :P

i love the scene where raven n lux tougue fight starts! haha, good work!

i love this! fabolous plot!

*squeal* Kaeriel is so cool! HE'S SO COOL! *dies overexcitement due to his coolness* Oh yeah, awesome chapter! :D

For Chapter Three, the part about Dellatrix and Raven, I noticed that you mis-typed "prize" as "price"? Just a note, not really that important, but... (:

Enjoy reading the story so much. it is so full of fantasy.
keep up the good work and update faster plz.

Peace,
^^

I should have realized when I was reading the story that it was you writing it. lmao. =D wonderful as always.

Haha, I am pretty much reading all of your stories. The whole Dellatrix liking Lux thing threw me off, but ti was an interesting twist. Keep up the good writing. ttyl