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sorceress
2008-09-11
ch 7, anon.
abusehi there!it's been a while since you updated this story of yours... I've been craving for the progress between Lux and Raven and also other characters! sobs... have pity on my patience... hope to see updates on this! thanks!

PS: I'm a fan of yours :P
CrimsonxButterfly
2008-06-23
ch 7,
abusemore! that was really suprising when u said dellatrix was gay... update soon
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 7, anon.
abuseRaven's so caring and understanding sexual demon :P haha I'm surprised dellatrix actually kissed lux! omg... Kaeriel's tenderness towards sorae wasn't quite expected! lolx. Keep up the good work!
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 6, anon.
abusewow,that's a hot chapter btw lux n raven. really lusty raven! lol, what a pity sedark jumped in :P
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 5, anon.
abusesparks btw the elf prince and sorae! lolx, nice!
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 3, anon.
abuselovely! hehe, you're good in generating ideas :P
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 2, anon.
abusei love the scene where raven n lux tougue fight starts! haha, good work!
sorceress
2008-04-16
ch 1, anon.
abusei love this! fabolous plot!
predict.this
2008-04-05
ch 7,
abuse*squeal* Kaeriel is so cool! HE'S SO COOL! *dies overexcitement due to his coolness* Oh yeah, awesome chapter! :D
predict.this
2008-04-05
ch 3,
abuseFor Chapter Three, the part about Dellatrix and Raven, I noticed that you mis-typed "prize" as "price"? Just a note, not really that important, but... (:
k-ky
2008-04-03
ch 7,
abuseEnjoy reading the story so much. it is so full of fantasy.
keep up the good work and update faster plz.

Peace,
^^
Ice and Snow
2007-09-30
ch 7,
abuseI should have realized when I was reading the story that it was you writing it. lmao. =D wonderful as always.
Dezi E
2006-11-04
ch 7,
abuseHaha, I am pretty much reading all of your stories. The whole Dellatrix liking Lux thing threw me off, but ti was an interesting twist. Keep up the good writing. ttyl
Remember the wnen it rains
2006-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love this story so much
The FiboNACHI Sequence
2006-09-15
ch 7,
abuseCan't say i didn't expect Dellatrix to love lux...

BUT RAVEN IS AWESOME! and I do like Kaeriel...

Hehehe, update!
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