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| SoLongJimmy 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI really hated this, it just didn't work/ make any sense/ I think the grammer may of been a little off... So I had every intention of flaming you, til I read the last two lines... And those lines just rocked my world. So now I am compelled to enjoy the whole thing. If you udnerstood any of that, then good on ya. |
| Zefskiy 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI really love this. It flows very nicely too. |