This is a lovely piece. It reminds me of something you would write to a piece of music... so much motion. Up and then down. Congratulations, you are an excellent writer. I enjoy listening to your mind through these works.

-Icatora

Weird! This is the sort of piece I expected to be more vague. I got the impression (correct me if I'm wrong) that this is a draft. I absolutely love the idea. It is a little odd at the end, but i that's what makes it so good. It could use a little revision here and there, but it's really fine as is. Good job. =)

-Leila