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| kitty003 2008-10-09 ch 1,   | id just like to point out that you put Maths twice in this. but on another note, IS THERE A SEQUEL!? PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! |
| Midnights Scream 2008-07-15 ch 1, | lol. it's great. the ending made me smile though I guess I expected more, but it was cute |
| Lovedward48 2008-05-09 ch 1, | Muahahahahaha! I love it! Especially the ending! Uriel is really cute and I like Daniels change in person. I'd really like to read more but I guess that you're not gonna write a sequel...damn! You did a good job and you're really good at describing!^^ |
| Airia Black 2007-07-15 ch 1, | Nicely done. I enjoyed this and your writting style is excellent. Keep up the good work. |
| Black Viper 2007-06-27 ch 1, | AWW!! Cute! Illegal but soo cute! |
| FlyingxChanges 2007-03-22 ch 1, | Oh my word. I love this. You should upload many stories like this one ^_^ |
| Dark Queen Anime 99 2006-11-10 ch 1, | Loved it. Good job. |
| Aphotic Euphony 2006-11-09 ch 1, | I like your style. And you got guts for turning this in to a teacher! |
| Edwit 2005-12-01 ch 1, | Wow... You turned this in to a teacher? And she/he didn't do anything? Heheh... They must've been scared or something. Like you were implying something... That'd be funny as hell. Great work, though. Very amusing. The teacher was hella hot, too. Oh so sexy. I would do him, too... -Robin |
| tangerinedreams 2005-11-11 ch 1, | Very well written work here. I especially like the mood that's set in the beginning of the piece and is continued throughout. |
| Dark-Night-Brittany 2005-11-09 ch 1, | I love the story..It reminds me of Gravitation if thats were your kinda getting the story from like the car and the kid in street lol. Anywayz loved it write more plz! Britt*Now I want to read my Gravitation Manga lol* |
| Kuronamida Towa 2005-11-07 ch 1, | Oh my! I love this story! It's so sweet! |
| Jon Emery 2005-11-06 ch 1, | Illicit, tender and erotic - the situation might be unrealistic, but you brought a certain level of credibility to this taboo subject. Incredibly well-written. |
| xglittergurlx1 2005-11-06 ch 1, | i feel so dirty for reading this..LOL oh well keep it up im likin the story =) |