a bit eerie, but very good. it's descriptive, and deep. I, too, have looked at my shadow, and wondered about it before.

nice job

SFF

Oh. This is kinda spooky. But I like it. The narrative style is awesome for this poem. Some parts are a bit unclear... but yeahh. That's about it. Oh yes, and you could use more descriptive language. You know, show don't tell... :). good job though

Oh, pretty and somehow ironic! What a strange poem, never red anything like it. Great job, Chobi

Luv, nina-chan

o, thanks for reviewing my story! _

lovely, peacefull ending; lovely, very contemplative; I adore it. A bit thought-provoking. Nice work