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| mistressKC 2006-05-25 ch 1, | Life was never meant to be black and white anyway ^_^ |
| Smoky Bear 2005-12-04 ch 1, | " “Shine on you crazy diamond” " - much respect for the floyd quote :D i love the way you pour your heart out and post it lol, takes me ages to post subjective poetry. the word technicolour is almost synethesic in this contexet, it's great. "threatened by shadows at night and exposed in the light" - (sorry i had to, it's in my head now lol!) yes, shine on! |
| loyanofviolence 2005-11-06 ch 1, | Good metophors/similies. Don't understand why you gave this an M rating? ♥Staring at the Infamous♥ |
| Death by the PEN 2005-11-06 ch 1, | very powerful...it could make an awesome song |