OMG...

this is f ing amazing.

one of the saddest stories i have ever read.

althoughh i do not like sad endings this one is really good.

while if u did make an ending or a sequel ( i know u won't) when zeke(like it better ) takes revange that would be AWSOME but non theless really good and keep up the good work(please)

Try and warn for tragedy, Man! Otherwise, brilliant.

Wow O.O

Kinda speechless. It was very good. Very good c: I liked it despite having everyone die. Kinda seemed like the only way. Still, I very much enjoyed it c:

O.O whaaa?

.. :c

O.O holy fuck -covers mouth- sorry.. but whoa. Scary..

Whoa O.O That was unexpected, yet I love it :D

It's disappointment to read the epilogue. I expect it to be long to explain everything. It's a disappointment to read a short chapter as this. :(

When I read the first chapter till somewhere Ciathan's get being an , it was puzzling, a big mass puzzling that makes me to keep continue revealing the puzzle. Now in this chapter it's heartbreaking. Makes me shed tears. Ciathan's a ! Stuck up one at that!

Yikes. That was a bit disturbing. I guess I was right in figuring it would be difficult for anyone to find happiness, especially Zeke.

I suppose that's where the muse led you. Though, I'd sad, but the ending, I'm not incredibly disappointed. Only, slightly due to the happiness factor. It was well written and dramatic. Thanks.

WOW. I did not see that coming. I'm rooting for Zeke more than ever, now. I just want him to win and be happy. I don't know how that will happen, or with whom, but it just has to happen. He has terrible luck in love/lust/infatuation.

Excellent job in building up to this point and it really works. There doesn't seem to be any contradiction in character and it most definitely adds to what will be read between the lines in the upcoming chapters.

This was such a sad story, so, so sad but IO loved it more then anything. It is fantastic and YOU are a fantastic writer. Keep up the excellent work!

Omg, I LOVE this story! Though this chapter made me cry, how can Ciathan be so heartless? I really, really hate him. I hope he doesn't kill Zeke, that would be so sad!

Excellent job though!

This may have been the most interesting thing I've ever read. I have to admit, I didn't really think I would like it. I didn't think it would be my cup of tea at all. And it wasn't. More like a cup of black coffee, the kind that makes your eyes snap open in the morning. This was beautifully written, and so full of emotion and madness. Ciathan's character was wonderful. I don't often read things where the characters are so believable. The ending was sad, which wasn't what I was expecting at all. Maybe I should have been but I wasn't. I was expecting something sweet...I was caught off guard. I can't even begin to organize my thoughts enough to explain what I really think. This was amazing. Great job.

I really enjoyed this story.

I loved your pull between the three characters, I really liked how I didn't know who Zeke was going to choose.

Your characters are vivid, and you really made me like each and everyone of them.

I can't wait to read more stuff from you.

Sayden.

Well, this story had a good start at least.

Sorry, but this is just how I truly felt about this story.

The writing is good, easy to follow and read. It's just too bad that not a whole lot was explained, as far as the other race and where they came from, and well, just plot development in general. I know you probably intended for it to be that way, but it ended so abruptly. With pretty much no resolution, in my opinion. It makes me suspect that you just tired of the story and decided to end it as soon as possible, in the easiest way as possible (killing off everyone in the story).

It should defiantly be expanded, because the ending doesn't make the beginning a worth while read. I REALLY hate saying this, because the writing was good, and I really value good writing.

Also, seriously, this is not Romance or Adventure. I agree with some of the other reviewers, it's defiantly Angst. I didn't see any real romance and not a lot of adventure either.

Anyway, I was just really disappointed because I still held some hope that Ciathan would get over himself or even better Zeke and the others would leave.. Gah, I just hate that I spent time reading this I guess. I might look at your other stories, because you are a good writer (i'm trying to stress this because I'm just being pissy about the ending lol) and it's very possible that this story was just a bad apple or whatever. Then again, other people might love this... major character death just isn't my cup-o-tea (and if you would have put a warning up I wouldn't have read this at all because it really puts me off.)