haha...awesomness XP... emo is as emo does, chaos

I guess...pretty funny? I don't know what to say, I'm at a loss of words to describe what I've just read. You DO realize that it's not K+, it's either T or M, right? Cuz on the part about sex and **...no offense! sorry!

Well, basically I'm a nice guy who posts nice reviews. Except I don't really know what to say, because I'm just 13...lol, i guess?

Hey, ok, fine. Pretty good, except I hope this isn't the end. Is this 1st chapter? Please be, I want more?

At the risk of rambling forever, I'm just gonna say...good job. Doesn't this review make you feel special!

Oh, and if you want you can review my story also it's http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2042969. Or not! Just see my profile, I guess!

-Signed Review, sadly-X-Eragon-X

(P.S:: I hope you don't hate me for posting such a long review, I'm not good at posting short reviews, I don't know why! Maybe it's cuz I don't know what I'm talking about but I want everyone to think that I do--which I dont!)