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Reviews For: My Asphyxiation
magnusthewolf 2006-07-18 . chapter 1
nice and cool lil poem here
poetic abortion 2005-11-24 . chapter 1
cruel. haunting. tragic.

like a necrophiliac on crack (& I so love the exploration of necrophilia). "A roving grasp over a virgin map" I had so many delightful images bouncing around in my mind when I read that line, it is just so seductive and pretty. lovely, lovely writing.

~* noelle
Kakyou Takashiro 2005-11-20 . chapter 1
tragic. poetic. comforting and disturbing all the same. so many words, from so little. i suppose that is truly poetry.

kakyou
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