 destinee's notebook 2008-06-21 . chapter 1The idea of words being recycled is true indeed. And the last three lines are quite insightful.
Thank you for stating said insight. :]
- Des |
 magnusthewolf 2006-07-18 . chapter 1this is deep and emotional and indeed interesting. very nice job. :) why not center the title? |
 forsakensmile 2006-01-01 . chapter 1Thanks so much for reviewing my stuff.
I love this poem. It conveys love just the way I like it.
"It's true/ That I don't love you/ The way you want me to."Just beautiful. |
 poetic abortion 2005-11-22 . chapter 1man, I feel stupid. I like drop dead when I read your review because you are like, you know, famous on FP.
anyway. me like the poem. no 'like' is an understatement, I'd say "LOVED it" but I am trying to broaden my vocabulary. I adored this with blinding passion. "I’m feeding you recycled words, tailoring them to your tastes" I'd copy and paste every line but I loved that in particular. everything in this is like a really GOOD song. lovely, lovely writing.
~* noelle |
 Arcane D. 2005-11-08 . chapter 1Possibly one of the best extended metaphor poems I've read in a while... Major props, Cindy Moon. - ADD-san |
 Green Yoshi 2005-11-06 . chapter 1what is love but words fed to fools...
I've been waiting for new works, I'm so happy to see you alive again. Well, ok, I've seen you alive recently, but I'm glad that your works are back. Though, these new works are, um, anything happen recently? |