Wow, it's a cool suicide. Just sorta matter of fact. Like here are the facts, these are the motions, this is reality. Kudos...

sad and beautiful

awesome poem! i LOVE the rhyme sceme in this and the last bit is incredible. rhythm is perfect and the imagery is beautiful. suitable title too. great job, mez

macabre beautiful.

* noelle

it gives this eery atmosphere and faint ideas of suicide in the first line, second stanza, was the word 'see' actually meant to 'see' or 'sea'? anyhows good work

keep writing!

*claps* *dances* I love it! It's really good, I think maybe you've grown as a writer a bit...very descriptive. Keep it up!-pammy-

umm.. wow. definately not your normal work, but i really like this. very kinda morbid, but still. very cool! *TI*

Wow... that was really sad. They just gave up hope and hanged themselves... that's a gruesome way to die, too... I HOPE YOU NEVER WANNA DO THAT! Sorry, emotions getting nervous... *twitch**twitch* *yelling growl*WAH! ... I need to get a life... seriously... that was really good, Shazaam, lol (sudden change of subject, hehe) GO SHAZAAM!

Interesting; I certainly enjoyed reading this. Well done.