 Alareic 2006-01-01 . chapter 3It's has been a while.
I loved the story. And I think I'm back to writing on Fictionpress once again.
Check my profile for a new story soon.
:D
-Alareic- |
 Mr Ragna Badguy 2005-12-25 . chapter 1Hi there! Thanks very much for your review. It makes my day! ^^ Anyway, on with the review. Well, I did like the way you do the story. It's very intriguing and I would want to know what's gonna happen next. Lila seems to be an interesting character and I'll like to know what will turn out for her. Anyway, hope to review again! ^^ |
 Casey Drake 2005-12-02 . chapter 2oo... sweet. and the rubber chicken episode was a nice little comic relief.
:) CD |
 blankee 2005-11-19 . chapter 2It might not be though but it's stunning! Absolutely! |
 Eloquently 2005-11-18 . chapter 2Oh...Mr. Yutzy's science class. You know something, I'm not even going to go there hahaha!
Great plot/ideas. I'm not one for the gang stuff, but this isn't bad. I like it!
-Bria |
 Clodhopper 2005-11-10 . chapter 1This was very interesting, I liked it a lot. Curious little tale you've given us here to think about. I'd be careful at the start things felt a bit choppy on descriptions, though the dialogue was great. Comma and punct errors were your biggest problems, like when commas go where in dialogue and that kind of thing.
Mack
PS sorry it took me so long to get over here and review you! |