I was wondering when you're going to update.

Arran's kind of assy. :( I feel bad for Victor for having to listen to that kind of stuff.

Wow. Haha SEX! (what the hell...directed toward me) So...is Victor going to be come all stalkery now!? Victor's my grandpa's name, just so you know. I got my middle name from him. Victoria. How sweet, I know.

XD I've missed this story.

In regards to the ** question. That's a toughie. I never know what to use for mine. **...sounds too vulgar. ** sounds too proper. It's a tough thing...

xo

I love this story! I can't wait to read what happens next!! Oh, and would you e-mail me the unedited chapter 8 please? My e-mail address: jinx13187@hotmail.com Update soon! TTFN! ;)

wrawr hot chapter! and yes i will updat esoory!! but lovely just lovely!

great story. it's amazing. you write really good. about the scene in chapter 8 here's my email adress teodora_ioan@yahoo.com. realy great story.

I read this at school the other day but forgot to review because I'm an airhead like that. :(

I feel sorry for him. He's such a pushover and I just want to slap him and tell him that Derek isn't worth it...I like a guy named Derek. He's the hottest guy at my school (in my opinion)...

Anyway. I didn't think it sounded juvenile. Psht. If you think this is I hate thinking of what people think mine is. Ow my chest itches...anyway...

Love xoxoxoxojawlrjd!

That interesting. KEEP IT GOING

eh, not as juvenile as you'd think. a bit...ah, redundant in some places. *laughs* that's ok, i liked reading this chapter. it was...good. *yup* :D

derek can be rely scary O_o but i absoluely loved this chapter! XD

this got me wondering if Derek loves Sean o.o I mean no one reacts like this for a **-buddy o.o

And... I don't think I'll get to see some incest will I?!

Waa I saw my name up there!! ^__^ *kisskiss*

Hmm...Well, overall I like this story a lot. In the begginging I was a little confused, but each chaoter, it seems to get better with the writing anf the story. Good job ad update soon^_^

Whisp

who the heck is Sean going to end up with? Are he and Caleb going to get together? Or is it someone else? I'm confused. I don't care really, as long as he doesn't have to be w/ 'Derek the Bastard'! Nu! I tell you, I would have to beat you up. Not joking.

Dude! Chapter eight killed me! Send me that scene! (harlekini@hellokitty.com)The Hannah thing put me off. I thought the dude he was doing Hannah in the bed next to Sean! XDDI sense lacking communication here XD Maybe they should talk to each other, it's rather important in relationships heheSo cute! It should be illegal with cute boys...they're rather lethal.

aw man!! **!why did you remove the scene?!?!?!?!

This isn't exactly child's play but anyone reading this should be aware of the graphical scenes [[which i love btw!]]

keep going

i'm not really into incestish fics but you might change my mind send the removed scene!

Ml,Alie