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| love-905 2006-06-25 ch 1,  | abusethat was really good |
| I Murder on Impulse 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abusemi god emz even as ur sis u neva told me u wrote that many storys! |
| jemraja 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abusehahaha you're such a psycho =) in your comments and your profile and all, i mean. strangely enough, your works are quite dark and morbid... and most of them are pretty good actually - surprisingly, they don't even sound awkward or cliched, as collections of short deep/depressing poems are prone to do.. and they're easy to read, and if i strain my braincells a tad further than their default sluggish stance, they have quite a.. deep meaning XD fun fun. and keep up the good work =) |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseIt was light hearted in the begining and then turned darker and darker. A good poem. DO somethign diferent, please? |
| allyburner 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg. Do you have a history of child abuse I don't know about? It's just that this is so good. So very, very powerful. I love it. So extremely meaningful. Not the shallow type I write. :D Keep goin', girl! - Ally B. |
| xiaobudian 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseand the greta poetess is at it again... i find this one extremely haunting. Short and haunting... deadly combination...hm...i should remeber to call u the great poetess someday. Anyway...keep writing cos' I love all your poems! |
| TornAngell 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was wonderful! I could feel all these things when I was reading it, and all I can say is it was wonderful. |
| Wishing On the Same Star 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abusesouless monsters and lost crippled souls =) very nice work!ur definitely getting better xP i like the poetric [ahahah is that a word??] language you've used ... ho hum. yep. nice nice poem. two thumbs and a half for that =D |