|Reviews for Life|
| FunkyFlower 12/7/05 . chapter 1
this is ok but a little confusing. not ur best but still pretty good. great job,
| Nokturnal Augury 11/12/05 . chapter 1
I love the contrast you used in this one. Too bad there are only a few people out there that really see how much life sucks in the long run...v_v
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 11/7/05 . chapter 1
Really nice, i particularly liked the lines "And the steps that are taken/ By the mass of wandering souls/ Are lined with stones and broken glass". They just jump out at me.