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| acatsrain 2008-09-15 ch 11,  | abuseOkay, when you say 'leave it to your imagination' you mean its taking place your just not writing it right? But they just met like three days ago? They hardly even know each other? That kind of saddens me, but whatever. Its great, and detailed. The king of writing I only wish I could accomplish (maybe some day...). I hope you update soon... though I really don;t think you well. Girl can hope, right? |
| Jynli 2008-09-04 ch 11, | abuseLOVE your work! Freaking awesome...UPDATE NOW! |
| pixystick 2008-08-20 ch 11, | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE?!?!? |
| ForeverImaginative 2008-08-17 ch 11, | abuseOk, so I only just came across this story tonight.. erm, this morning rather. Wow, I'm so incredibly taken with this story! And I'm very glad to see that you plan to have quick(er) posts, because I will be greatly waiting the next chapter. =) Thank you again for a wonderful story. |
| Emily 2008-08-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow I love this story! It's so good. I just started reading it and I can't wait for the next update! I sure hope it's not months from now! please update soon! |
| J.E.Wyatt 2008-07-31 ch 11, | abusethat was indeed a very steamy scene. and it was very cruel of you to leave it off there! hope you update soon, and not maintain your habit of leaving us poor readers hanging, dying, in suspense. make haste and update! lol |
| FM Radio 2008-07-30 ch 11, | abuseUPDATE AGAIN! (exclamation points time a million!) |
| inkstainedtips 2008-07-28 ch 11, | abusesteamy, very steamy. I love it! I'm looking forward to the next update :) |
| elliebelle 2008-07-27 ch 11, | abusehahaha. they are so dysfunctional. i adore it. please update sooner! -ellie |
| akaCHEEKS 2008-07-27 ch 11, | abusehello, new reader. i can't believe that you can be so cruel as to leave us to a cliffhanger like that! haha, is she going to get hungry after their little love scene? that would be a funny interception in the middle of their moment. |
| mdm-pompadour 2008-07-27 ch 11, | abuseThis is a wonderful story and I was extremely happy to see the alert that you`ve updated :) Please continue ! I am surely waiting of what naughty things they are capable of ;) |
| kay 2008-07-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseAh what cruel, CRUEL a cliffhanger!! They're hilarious...Jordan is awesome and very patient it seems...please update soon!! |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-26 ch 11, | abuseyes I have read the newest Malory book! its awesome! you should so read it.. |
| zagato 2008-07-26 ch 11, | abuseHi Starox! Thank you for updating. I have your story as one of my favorites. Please continue. |
| Masquerade hide your face 2008-07-26 ch 11, | abuseYeah. I'm so happy. I've been waiting for so long. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds like it's going to be very,very good! Please update soon. |